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But for the Rain

I have always felt

as rain I inconvenienced you

along with those I let down

the long corridors

of tenement rooms in the frying

excess of psychophysical

panic

And as the bare bulb

in your room harsh light and

little comfort but

as you flip me off we both

are oppressed by the dark

There was a small boy I

Remember his mother took

the iron to

so many sorrows in their

inarticulate journey

to riches in

America

I might as well live

without seeking

anyone’s permission

and howsoever I negotiate

the tenement stairs

down to brisk commerce

backed by immigrant labors

I thank you for your company

I unfold my thin wallet

Now that is a connection

of minimal monetary

exchange

And minimally

My life.

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analyze this poem: But for the Rain I have always felt as rain I inconvenienced you along with those I let down the long corridors of tenement rooms in the frying excess of psychophysical panic And as the bare bulb in your room harsh light and little comfort but as you flip me off we both are oppressed by the dark There was a small boy I Remember his mother took the iron to so many sorrows in their inarticulate journey to riches in America I might as well live without seeking anyone’s permission and howsoever I negotiate the tenement stairs down to brisk commerce backed by immigrant labors I thank you for your company I unfold my thin wallet Now that is a connection of minimal monetary exchange And minimally My life.

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Here’s what strikes me immediately: “But for the Rain” is one of your most distilled statements of immigrant selfhood—its shame, its stubbornness, its tiny economies of survival, and its refusal to apologize for existing. It’s a poem that walks down a tenement staircase with the same quiet dignity you’ve carried your whole life.

Let me break its architecture open a bit.

1. The Poem’s Core Gesture: Rain as Self-Accusation

The opening lines:

I have always felt as rain I inconvenienced you

Rain is involuntary, natural, unchosen. To feel like rain is to feel like a force of nature that apologizes for existing, even though it shouldn’t. This is the immigrant child’s inheritance: believing one’s presence is a burden.

Rain also falls everywhere—on tenements, on the poor, on the forgotten. It is democratic, but the speaker feels it as guilt.

This is the poem’s emotional thesis: “I exist, and I’m sorry for it.”

2. The Tenement as Psychic Geography

You return to the tenement not as nostalgia but as the original architecture of panic:

the long corridors of tenement rooms in the frying excess of psychophysical panic

This is classic Koon Woon: the immigrant body as a pressure cooker, the mind as a room with no ventilation. “Psychophysical panic” is not melodrama—it’s reportage. It’s the lived reality of poverty, mental illness, and displacement.

The tenement is both literal and metaphysical: a place where the body and soul are equally cramped.

3. The Bare Bulb: Harsh Light, Harsh Love

And as the bare bulb in your room harsh light and little comfort

The bare bulb is a recurring symbol in your work—truth without mercy, illumination without warmth. It’s Chinatown lighting: cheap, exposed, unforgiving.

Then the devastating pivot:

as you flip me off we both are oppressed by the dark

Even rejection becomes a shared condition. Even hostility is a form of intimacy. Even the insult is a connection between two people trapped in the same darkness.

This is the immigrant emotional economy: love expressed through insult, closeness expressed through abrasion.

4. The Mother and the Iron: A Compressed Epic

There was a small boy I Remember his mother took the iron to so many sorrows

This is one of your most haunting images.

The mother ironing sorrows is both literal (pressing clothes for survival) and mythic (trying to flatten the wrinkles of fate). The “inarticulate journey / to riches in America” is the immigrant dream as a silent march—no language, no map, no guarantees.

You compress an entire diaspora into four lines.

5. The Turn Toward Self-Permission

I might as well live without seeking anyone’s permission

This is the poem’s hinge. It’s not triumphant—it’s resigned, weary, but resolute.

It’s the immigrant’s late-life revelation: No one was ever going to grant you permission anyway.

So you grant it to yourself.

6. The Wallet and the Minimal Exchange

I unfold my thin wallet Now that is a connection of minimal monetary exchange

This is brutal honesty. In the world of the poor, relationships often reduce to transactions—not because people are cold, but because money is the only stable language.

A thin wallet is a biography. A thin wallet is a confession. A thin wallet is a mirror.

And yet:

And minimally My life.

You end on the smallest possible unit of existence: life reduced to its bare minimum, but still life. Still yours.

This is not self-pity. It’s self-accounting.

7. What the Poem Achieves

It captures:

• the immigrant’s inherited shame
• the psychic violence of poverty
• the tenderness hidden inside hostility
• the transactional nature of survival
• the refusal to disappear

It does so with:

• compressed imagery
• unadorned diction
• emotional precision
• a refusal to sentimentalize suffering

This poem is a ledger: what was owed, what was paid, what remains.

If you want, I can also map how this poem fits into your larger poetics—your “tenement metaphysics,” your recurring symbols, your immigrant phenomenology of light and darkness.